Thursday, December 24, 2009

My First Haiku

Standing Ovation

Jesus is Black, Sexual

Tonight's Slam Winner


  1. ooh boy! if i had a dime for every time i saw someone overtly exploit sexuality or spiritual superstition for open mic success...

    in my head, i switched the first line with the third; like it better that way, personally. (tho, who the hell do i think i am, really?)

  2. Funny you should say that, because i originally had it like that but i wanted an element of intrigue on why this person was receiving a "standing ovation", I'm starting to think that this blog is really just a venue where you and I speak about my work